Puella Magi Madoka Magica Sketch-Homura ribboned

Sketch for fanart for sale. In PMMM, Tomoe Mami has the ability to wrap opponents in gift wrap ribbons. She binds Akemi Homura twice this way in the series--as the formidable Homura in episode 3 and the less formidable "Moemura" in the back story episode 10. I have used the setting of episode 3 for this sketch, although I've used the meganeko Moemura as a wink to a friend. I will probably revert it to the non-glasses-wearing-girl for the final. There is also a background in the scene I haven't made sense of yet--it looks like it could be wrapping paper all crinkled up.

I'm not quite sure what I want to do here. I'm considering a foreground with Mami in front, back towards us, casting her "ribbon" at Homura, but that might get too complicated

Pencil on Bristol Board